Senryu II 06 Tuesday Dec 2011 Posted by Eva Von Pelt in Short Poems ≈ 10 Comments Tagspoem, poetry, Senryu, sensual, writing silk rips under a fountain of snow spilling heat Share this:FacebookXLike Loading... Related
Heaven said:
delicious writing ~
Eva Von Pelt said:
Thank you so much, Heaven. I’m so happy to have you as a regular visitor : )
expatinCAT said:
Beautifully suggestive and sensual! // Peter.
Eva Von Pelt said:
Thanks, Peter! I’m glad my intent came through : ))
Arron Shilling (@ArronShilling) said:
quick but far reaching – these words have the power of extention V.strong and conductive of the physical …promting (e)motion 😉 skillfully crafted
Eva Von Pelt said:
Thanks, Arron! I love that you made a connection between the (e)motion and the physical…something I long to do, but didn’t realize happened here, until you pointed it out : ))
Heaven said:
Just wanted to drop by and wish you Happy Holidays ~
All the best for the new year and I hope you continue writing ~
K. Shawn Edgar said:
burn me please
claudia said:
hmmm nice…this can melt easily loads of snow..
thanks for your visit eva and the nice words – wishing you a wonderful start into the new year
brian said:
oo there are some nice allusions in this …and some fine heat on a cold night…smiles. happy new year!