zinnia petals
nestled among weeds
lingering dusk
Haiku I
18 Sunday Sep 2011
Posted in Short Poems
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Eva Von Pelt
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I like the juxtaposition here of something beautiful, the zinnia, and the unwanted,undesirable weeds…all of this as the day holds on till night overcomes it. I love it! // Peter.
I’ve created a new category for ‘short poems’ in hopes of learning some new, shorter forms.
This is my first ‘official’ haiku! So, I really appreciate your thoughtful comment, Peter : )
nice image of softness against weeds ~
I like that you trying out new forms like haiku. it is challenging to write given the structure but you do it well. I note that you tweet micropoetry; beautiful words that stir the senses ~
Thank you, Heaven!
You have inspired me to try the 5/7/5 : ) I enjoy conforming to the various structures and appreciate your comments!
Twitter is a nice way to try some things out…would love to follow you if you are on : )